Date: 2013-07-23 01:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] syupeojunieo.livejournal.com
I really loved this<3 whiny!tao and princess oh we're spot on an the fact that you picked this scene makes me happy.

I don't have any suggestions on your writing, I think everything from characterization to flow was very well done. I especially like the way you write dialogue and how you seamlessly added in the scripted lines. (:
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